Creatures Caves

i am writing several books.
one: the first one is going to be a very serious, moral sci-fi book. on this planet, their are the native nomad culture of colored cetaur people. about half a millienial ago these advanced repto people came and built cities.(they were from another planet.) they were taught by a made up religion to destroy all of the 'inferior' people that were peacefully liveing in tribes on the expansive grasslands.
a new technology is made and the Grand Warlord makes ready for an ultimate battle, for their are murmurs of a prophecy among them that is quite similar to the nomads...
a strange female is born among the nomad-people. she grows to teenagerhood, with a boyfriend. however, her tribe is killed in a Repto hunt, and they journy, homeless. they discover how the nomad prophecy is coming to reality, and a being among them who carries an unaturel item will bring order among the races.(oh yeah.males have antlars.)
they are separated, the male sent to a slave cam, where the warlord turns him eviel, so the nomads will be shocked that their own is fighting them. the warlord also realizes his power.
the female wanders, guided by strange dreams, watching the emassing nomads prepare for a great battle against low odds. she enters a forest and finds that the Tree Folk, mentioned fairy tails of nomads that their are nomads in the Great Forest, are true. she then finds a clearing where she learns why she is here, and sees the truth...
at the begining of the battle, many are slain, and the male nomad kills many. then, the battle stops. on the yonder hill, a shining, graceful nomad, illumanated by the morning sun, with a glorius spread of antlars, turns the prophecy to reality. the reptos murmur if its the destroyer, omen of evil. the nomads wonder if it istheir god. the light is shadowed, and she appears, just like the prophecey, the deliver carries an unatural item.
she speaks, telling the truth. how the reptos hated the nomads and thought the nomads evil. and the nomads vice versa. how both races could benifit each other, and live in harmony.
her old friend, bent on evil, attacks her. they both fight, and she kills him. before he dies, he sees the truth.
she is mortalily wounded, the warlord and his people realize their mistake. they hug the nomads and begin plans for harmony.
she parts with soloem words. her departed assence walks up to the stars, and sees her friend. she knows she cannot live on her home, for she knows the secrets of the world. "it is so. they are not ready.another one is not needed to guide, for they guide themselves, as always."

Second: this is an idea of humans, and three other aliens who select intellectual children to train as Keepers. these are sci-fi warriors who keep order against the Destroyers, evil keeper warriors that threaten galactic peace. (their armour and weapons match their animal prefrnces and elments.)
one, Solar, has gold and yellow armour, lioness, and sun element, is from an old line who posess great power. she belives her father dead. the Destroyers and their leader need her, for she is themost powerful in a millenia, and she is the long lost princess, heir to the human colonizied planet raysar. she falls in love with Quicksilver, silver, blue, wolf, and moon elements. he is powerful, but not to much. battles are thought, and her father is actully the leader of the organization! he and Silver try to save her. her father dies, the evil guy dies, silver is wounded, and the Destroyers are destroyed and peace reigns. she is given the title leader of the Keepers, a grand suit of armour, and silver is healed.
i am planing on two more, once i wright the first one. i am thinking of it as a anmie show.