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Toxic Trial Art Moe | 10/7/2003 | 2 | I've been tinkering with my norn meshes and I decided to try and make a toxic norn. And here it is. I would really like some comments on this one. |
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Awww
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YES! YYEESS! Someone finnaly made a 3d style toxic! You are amazing!
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That's awesome. Why don't you make a norn breed with your meshes?
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Well I'm not sure about everyone else but I think it is perfect, Moe! Excellent job... I'll never understand how people make such wonderful things in 3DsMax. Keep up the great work.
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MNB | 10/11/2003
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| erm, looks like doughy... maybe he ate to much not so rotten food? maybe you could fix the nose bit where those lumps come down and just texture that to the face?
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xan | 10/8/2003
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| Again, more areas that should be improved upon:
- The teeth are pretty much fine but need to be rounded off a little and closer together. I'd hate to have teeth like that, they look rather painful...
- The nose looks just a little too big and sticks too far out...
- The ears are okay as is, but could use a little work... they need to be 'thicker' and the top/bottom edges need to curl around a bit more.
Just my opinion.
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Moe | 10/8/2003
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| I fixed those some what. Just keep checking that web page.
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xan | 10/8/2003
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| Also. May I make a note on the 'stairsteps' on the side of the norn's face... those need to be fixed if possible.
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Moe | 10/8/2003
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| Well I'm not a master of 3D Norns , it's not going to look perfect. and Yes I know the Eyes buldge out too much I'll fix them in my icon, Also take into account that the norn is at an angle. The Coloring however is too bright in some spots but overall I thinks it's fairley correct. Thank you for all the Advice and criticism I have went and fixed what I found as mistakes and the new image(s) will be placed on this site... http://web.tampabay.rr.com/moespage/Web 1/toxic_norn_trial.htm
Excuse the Quality of the image. It is on the Internet you know...
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Wow.. Now that is good, Moe!
Yes, the eyes do look a tad buldgy, and the coloring is abit brightish, and the teeth are too perftect. (As in too square) Other than that, it is excellent.
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