AquaShee wrote:
I've got to hand it to you, sam999, you wrote a story, published it, got a dose of criticism and simply took it as a challenge to improve. That's pretty awesome, you'll be sam1000 in no time. 
Thanks but I'm perfectly happy with my present username. Taking criticism well... ...learned from working with the SCP foundation creepypasta project due to their rather overzealous banhammering.
AquaShee wrote:
Genetics: What if the Shee's genetic experiments go wrong? The Grendel might be cute and cuddly compared to what *could* spawn from those test tubes.
This reminds me of a really crazy theory I read once on a otherwise creatures-unrelated sci-fi blog. That the Space Jockey, the fossilized creature from the film Alien is a.... ....shee. Look at it! Biotech ship. Long nose. Big. Sort of fused with a chair. Biotechnological skills to make the xenomorphs.... ....and the stupidity to not see why doing so was an epically bad idea. It all fits! Sort of anyway.
AquaShee wrote:
Grendels: Has anyone ever seen the Grendel Mother? Other than what I assume must be its, erm, cloaca? How does it move about? Who don't female grendels look like the grendel mother? Is she like a queen?
Personally I always thought of the Grendel Mother as being kind of like a termite queen. A hugely obese immobile grendel consistently pumping out eggs and never moving. More gross then creepy.
AquaShee wrote:
Ettins: Just what are they up to? The shee are gone, why are they still gathering gadgets? Do they have a plan? Or are they just curious? Or perhaps they are too curious...
Beware the ettins, they serve the Manufactured Newborn!
Oh shee now that I made that connection between ettin's apparently harmless behavior and one of the FEAR Mythos it cannot unseen. Let's just say if I see so much as one clockwork thing I can't recognize it's time for KILL HOTS and lots of it. And nightmares haunted by satanic ettins.
All in all, thanks AquaShee. 100% good ideas. And the Poltergeist who likes Donuts is also pretty funny.