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Through the warp...   
Sfot

Sfot



  1/14/2007

Prologue.

Very few people have six brothers: Mark, John, Luke, Paul, Nick and Adam. I?m the oldest, and the only girl. My name? Tiffany. I?m 15. But I?m lost now, and I?ll never see my brothers or my dad again. Mum was taking me somewhere, but to get there we had to go through a forest. We hadn?t seen the turn coming. We had crashed and she wasn?t waking up. I got out an started running,

I was running for at least an hour when I saw the hut and ran inside. The door then closed and locked as I spun around and stared at it. It was around then I noticed the humming sound, and the blue light from behind me. Once more I turned around.

I stared at the blue, swirling vortex in front of me. It was not human. As far as I knew it wasn't even from this galexy.

My train of thought was disturbed as a creature poked it's head through. I wasn't even given time to scream before an arm shot out, grabbed my wrist and dragged me through. It was more terrifying then the crash that had killed my mum.

When I landed it was in a rolled up position. I looked up, and huddled up tighter. I knew the place I was in. I had seen it every day since I had downloaded Docking Station. Standing over me was the tree hugger that had pulled me through. The adult was smiling, and in one outstretched paw there was a cookie.

I screamed.
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Sanity is sticky, and it's uncomfortable when it's come out your ears.
Trust me, I found out the hard way.

 
Draconorn

Draconorn



  1/15/2007

Really cool!
I wouldn't mind being pulled through a warp, I love my little nornas :)

 
KC11

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  1/15/2007

Looks good!

I would scream too, if I had lost my mother and had been pulled into DS, no matter how much I love my norns.


Do not upset the ugly worm, lest it be a dragon in disguise. (>oo)>

 
Draconorn

Draconorn



  1/16/2007

I'd scream if my mum died, but living in DS would be pretty cool, if only for a short while.
I can't wait until you do the next part!

 
Sfot

Sfot



  1/17/2007

Chapter 1: A twin surprise.

Slowly I woke up from my sleep. I didn't even know I had fallen asleep. It was the sound of voices that had woken me. Not the nornish chatter I had gotten used to in what seemed like half an hour.

"Brother, look, their all jumpy about something. It's not a grendel: I'd know if it was. It's something...alien. It's almost a shee-like scent."

"How can you be so sure, sister? I know you got spliced with a norn and everything, but your just scaring me now."

It was scaring me too. Shee like? I looked around. Whoever it was, they were taking the lift down. I couldn't see anywhere to hide. I watched in fascination as the two shee stepped out and what was possibly the female look straight at me.

She nudged the other one and pointed at me. I was guessing they were twins, as thei faceshape was simmilar even if the on pointing had fur and norn ears.They stared for a second, and then all three of us slowly opened our mouths and started screaming. If I kept this up, then I wouldn't be able to even speak later on.
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Sanity is sticky, and it's uncomfortable when it's come out your ears.
Trust me, I found out the hard way.

 
Draconorn

Draconorn



  1/17/2007

Great! I really like it.
Sheenorn, hee hee. :)
I must try that (runs off to evil splicing machine)

 
Sfot

Sfot



  2/4/2007

Sorry it's late, I got sidetracked (Read: I had homework)
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Chapter 2: Zippity what-what?

Spirit had sent her brother who turned out the be the Lone Shee to get us some tea and cookies. Turns out that the NornShee was quite cheerful and likes quite a few of the things I do. The Lone Shee is called Soul. I didn't ask.

So I told her about my family, and she listened and nodded and laughed when I hit Soul on the head with a carrot for asking for a quirky cookie. For shee, they're quite young. Spirit in human years is about 16, and Soul is 22. I told her about my brothers and how I missed them, and she smiled slighty.

"I think there's somethingh we can do for you..."
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About an hour later Mark, Luke, John, Paul, Nick, Adam and I are hugging one another and crying buckets. Spirit had dragged her brother away to give us some privicy. They had all brought their laptops, and Luke had grabbed mine too. I had cried the most out of all 7 of us.

...So we all sat down, logged onto DS and smiled as norns came up behind us and watched in amazment as they saw, well, themselves live their lives on the screen. It was an amazing experence for both them and us.
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Comments please!


Sanity is sticky, and it's uncomfortable when it's come out your ears.
Trust me, I found out the hard way.

 
Draconorn

Draconorn



  2/5/2007

Great! Really well written.
 


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