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  1/1/2007

It will not be coming quite yet, because I am not finished with the first chapter, but here is a small picture of a sneak preview...

Edit: I have removed the picture. It doesn't go well with the book.


Do not upset the ugly worm, lest it be a dragon in disguise. (>oo)>

 
Wup

Wup



  1/1/2007

X'D This is an early april fools, right?

ps. I haven't played Monster Raannnrrrnnchhdoggy
 
KC11

KC11


 visit KC11's website: DragonClawWritings (Tumblr)
  1/1/2007

This isn't an apirl fools.

Can you not see the picture?

Edit: I've finished the first chapter. But right now I'll just release the name and "proluge" until someone else posts.

The Lythian Chronicles
By KC11
Book One: Light and Darkness

Prologue
Once, at the beginning of time, the dragons of the sun and moon walked among the gardens of earth for many years. However, man came and began to destroy the gardens. The dragons managed to save a few of the gardens, hiding them from the eyes of most men, only letting a fair few settle in the lands. Lythia is one of those gardens.

Lythia is one garden which holds many humans. All the humans have had all access to outside technologies cut off. Their most complicated vehicle is something that looks like a three wheeled bicycle. Their most complicated heating device is a bundle of logs. On and on like that.

In Lythia, as well as in most other gardens, there are animals, both known in our world and unknown. Everything, from rats to dragons, exists in Lythia.
These books illustrate the greatest turning points of Lythia. The greatest epic story of Lythia. And it all began with the misstep of one ordinary man…

Edit: Seeing as no one has bothered to post, I will post the first chapter:

Chapter One
The Dragon of Light

“Where am I?”
A man was lying on the floor of a hall. He had slightly long black hair, with slight flecks of gray in it. He was rather tall, and carried only a sword as his weapon. His name was Medek.
Medek got up from the cold floor and looked about. He was in a hall lit only by the torches on the wall. At the end of the hall was a wooden door with rusty hinges. He looked down the other side of the hall to see nothing but blackness.
He shook his head.
“How did I get here?” he wondered.
He tried to remember what had happened. He remembered that he had been hunting in the forest for Elkie. Then he had found one and chased it. It had gone off the path, so he followed it. Then he lost track of it.
He then remembered something else. He had been trying to find the path again when he suddenly felt a hard blow to his head. He had just seen a human shaped shadow bending over him before he lost conscience.
None of this made sense to him. He assumed he had been kidnapped. But why? What would anyone want with him, a simple hunter? He scratched his head thinking.
Then there was the fact that he was not in an apparent prison. He was simply in a hallway, sitting there.
“Perhaps they dropped me.” He thought, although he also thought that unlikely.
He waited for a while, then decided to try and see what was on the other side of the wooden door.
Slowly he walked to the door. Slowly again he opened the door. As he did so, he drew out his sword, ready for anything that was behind the door.
When the door was open wide enough, he quietly slipped inside.
The room was filled with cages, all stacked up against the walls of the chamber. There were also sticks, whips, and weapons of the like. Medek looked in the middle of the room.
Right in the middle of the room was an enormous cage. It almost reached the ceiling in height, and it was wide enough to hold a rather large elephant. And inside the cage lay…

“A dragon!” he thought.
There lay a dragon, asleep. It was a she, for she had rather short horns on her head. She also seemed to be at the point between teen and adult, judging by her size and proportions. She had blue purple scales, with lightning blot markings on both sides of her, and the most brilliant sun marking on the top of her head.
“The Sign of the Sun!” whispered Medek. “She is a major light dragon! From the look of her scale colors and markings, she must be a lightning dragon!”
At once, the great dragon began to twitch, then slowly woke up. Medek dashed behind a desk to hide, just in case the dragon got frightened and hit him with fire, or worse, a bolt of lightning.
The dragon rose up, shook her head, and looked around with blue eyes. Medek gasped. A dragon with blue eyes was extremely rare.
She looked right at the corner where Medek hid, and said “I know you are there. There is no good in hiding. I heard you’re thoughts when you were trying to decide to go in.”
Medek came out, looked around, then asked “Heard my thoughts? You can read minds?”
The dragon rolled her eyes, then said “Of course. You humans are so dim witted sometimes. I am a dragon, meaning I can read minds.”

“Not all dragons can read minds.” Said Medek, a little annoyed.
“Maybe, but most can.”
The dragon stretched as much as the cage would allow. Then she fixed her blue eyes back on Medek.
Medek was a little discomforted by the piercing eyes, so he cleared his throat and asked “Great dragon, could you please tell me what your name may be?”
The dragon sat upright, and looked at the human. Then she said “You may call me Safire.”
“Er, right, Safire.” Said Medek, scratching his neck. “You seem to have been kidnapped and are now trapped in that cage.”
“Took you long enough to figure that one out.” Commented Safire.
“And there seems to be no way I can get you out.” Continued Medek.
“Actually…” but Safire didn’t get to finish. For right then the door creaked open.
Medek leapt behind the desk and hid there, watching what was going on.
A man walked in, his black boots clunking against the hard floor. Medek looked up to see that the man also wore a black cloak. Medek’s eyes followed a rod that the man carried.
There seemed to be nothing special about the rod. It was black and long, like most rods. But Medek sensed something else. The thing had magical power. Dark magical power.
As Medek watched, the man lifted the rod up to the cage.
“Hey, lizard. Where’s your little green one?”
“I have told all of you men, I have no idea where he is.” Said Safire, coldly.
“You liar.” And with a swift, sudden motion, the man whipped the rod and beat Safire cruelly on her head. She screamed in agony. Medek understood why. The rod was filled with dark magic. Dark magic and the dark was the greatest weakness of light dragons. If left in the dark to long or hit with dark magic, they would weaken, then die.
The man laughed a cruel laugh, then when the hitting was done, he left.
Medek slowly came out of his hiding place.
“Are you alright?” he asked.
Safire didn’t say anything at first, then said “No.”
Medek sighed. He then said “As I said before, there is nothing I can do for you. So I guess you’re stuck here.”
“Actually, there are some keys on that table over there.” Said Safire, gesturing over to a table nearby. “I believe they are supposed to open this cage.”
Medek looked over at the table. Sure enough, there were a few large keys on that very table. Slowly he crept over there, all the while looking around, checking to make sure no one came.
It was then that he heard a pounding on the roof. Medek froze where he was. The pounding increased, and some splinters fell to the floor.
Safire looked up to see that the roof was slowly beginning to cave in. She was a little worried. She thought that if the roof did cave in, it would fall on both of them. It would certainly kill the human, and perhaps cause her some injury. And what was trying to get in?
The pounding noise continued to increase in frequency and volume. Medek began to look for something to duck under. The desk again saved his life.
Just as he ducked beneath the desk, the roof had had enough, and a shower of splinters, wood, and the like came down with a huge crash.
Medek and Safire shielded their eyes against the blinding dust as it came down. They slowly peaked through their hands to see just what happened.
The shadow of a dragon came through the light and dust. As the dust cleared, the dragon came forward, right to the center of the room.
When the dust was completely gone, they were all amazed. They could tell the dragon was female right away. She had dark scales, purple-black. She had jet black wings, and dark purple eyes. Horns sprung up all over her. She was a bit larger than Safire, but just a bit.
“Hello.” She said “I am Viara.”



Do not upset the ugly worm, lest it be a dragon in disguise. (>oo)>

 
Draconorn

Draconorn



  1/2/2007

Wow! That's awesome!
(I would have posted earlier if I had been online)

 
awmanman

awmanman



  1/2/2007

Cool. Its a very enjoyable story.

Nine times have I been told im crazy and ten times I have accepted it.
 
Wup

Wup



  1/4/2007

Lol, when I aid that it was an April Fools joke, I meant that the picture you made was horrid. No offence, but really, look at it.

ps. I haven't played Monster Raannnrrrnnchhdoggy
 
KC11

KC11


 visit KC11's website: DragonClawWritings (Tumblr)
  1/4/2007

Yeah.

I'm terrible with paint.


Do not upset the ugly worm, lest it be a dragon in disguise. (>oo)>

 
Laura
Tea Queen

Laura

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  1/5/2007

Don't feel discouraged KC11, everybody's got to start somewhere when they draw. :)
 
Wup

Wup



  1/5/2007

Yeah, I remember my first attempt at a camel in Paint. O_o' When my dad fixes the hard drive from the Windows 98 we saved, I'm sooo showing you.

ps. I haven't played Monster Raannnrrrnnchhdoggy
 
Draconorn

Draconorn



  1/6/2007

((Paint is a good programme to start with, easy to use.))
It's a very good story, KC11!
I thought you and Evilspirit had some secret plot going on in the RPG, so it must've come from this story. :P

 
Wup

Wup



  1/6/2007

Wha-

Hey! Viara's copyrighted!;)


ps. I haven't played Monster Raannnrrrnnchhdoggy
 
KC11

KC11


 visit KC11's website: DragonClawWritings (Tumblr)
  1/8/2007

Actually, I made this AFTER the RPG.


Inspired by it.

And I will give you credit for Viara at the end of the book. Or maybe the introduction, saying "Hello. This book is based on an RP..."



Do not upset the ugly worm, lest it be a dragon in disguise. (>oo)>

 
Wup

Wup



  1/8/2007

Mleep! I'm gonna be in a book! :)

ps. I haven't played Monster Raannnrrrnnchhdoggy
 
Draconorn

Draconorn



  1/9/2007

It's a neat story, are you going to post more?
(I'd laugh if you put me in it. No, seriously. Who needs a Hand in a story with no norns?)

 
KC11

KC11


 visit KC11's website: DragonClawWritings (Tumblr)
  1/9/2007

Yes and yes. I am going to post more (once I get more done) and yes, you will be in the story. However, you will come much later, in the second or third book.

Arch will be in the book too. But I will change his name to Ark, seeing as he is actually going to be in another book.


Do not upset the ugly worm, lest it be a dragon in disguise. (>oo)>

 
awmanman

awmanman



  1/9/2007

(I dont know if Arch will work in your books physics but i would like to see it! :D)

Nine times have I been told im crazy and ten times I have accepted it.
 
Draconorn

Draconorn



  1/10/2007

XD I'm laughing! You put me in the story!
I'm touched... :)

 
KC11

KC11


 visit KC11's website: DragonClawWritings (Tumblr)
  1/20/2007

Sorry for the long wait for the next chapter.

My mom wouldn't get off the laptop, and that's where I stored the story.

I'm typing this as my parents are on a walk.


Chapter 2
The Dragon of Darkness

Viara walked up to Safire’s cage.
“The keys are cursed.” She said. “I guess I came just in time.”
“Who are you?” both Medek and Safire asked at the same time.
Viara looked at both of them, then said “As I have told you before, my name is…”
“Yes, yes, we know you name.” said Safire. “We just don’t know you.”
Viara looked at them again, then said “I was flying back to my home when I sensed someone was in trouble. I came quickly.”

She then moved her hand over the cage. The cage began to melt, slowly at first, then gushing down like a waterfall, until it was no more.
Safire shook herself as she came out of the spot of the cage.
“How did you do that?” she asked.
“That I cannot tell you, I’m afraid.” Said Viara.
She then made a circling gesture with her hands. As she did so, a swirling portal appeared in the floor.
“I could take you to my home, if you’d like.” She said.
“Really?” asked Safire “I do need someplace to… stay.”
Medek knew that Safire had nearly said “hide”. Still, stay sounded better.
“But what will become of him?” asked Safire, gesturing to Medek.
“I don’t know.” Said Viara. “We could eat him.”

Medek stuttered as he was about to say he wanted to go with them. Fear shown in his eyes.
But then, Viara’s dragon face became a smile.
“I was just kidding. You can come with us if you want.”
“Uh… er… I might…”
“Well, we don’t have all day.” Said Viara, and she dived into the portal.
Safire was about to dive in too, but she saw that the human was still standing there.
“Aren’t you coming, human?”
“First of all, my name is Medek.” Said Medek. “And… I don’t really… I might go… but…”
“Well, come on!” said Safire, and she pushed the protesting Medek into the portal. As soon as he had gone, she dived in after them.
For a while, they were all surrounded by swirling lights and felt nothing but air. Then they felt cold, rocky ground beneath their feet, and they tumbled out the portal to Viara’s home.
Safire lifted her head to see that they were at the edge of a cliff. She got up a backed away a little ways, then got curious and peaked over its edge.
There were hundreds of caves spread out below them. And inside most of the caves were many large dragon families.
“A draconian society!” Safire gasped in amazement.
Indeed it was. Dragons of all colors, and all shades of colors, flew two and fro. Red dragons, green dragons, purple dragons, blue dragons, violet dragons, and even albino dragons flew, tending to young, or looking to hunt, or just resting on rocks.
“This is amazing.” Said Safire.
“Welcome to Juthaia.” Said Viara. “A sub region in Lythia.”
“Wow.” Said Medek. “I’ve never been in a draconian society before.”
Safire looked with joy out at Juthaia. Then she hung her head as she remembered who would probably never see this place.
Viara saw the sad look that had suddenly come across Safire’s face, so she asked “Hey, what’s wrong?”
Safire looked at the black dragon, then said “Oh, nothing.”
Then she threw herself at the floor, sobbing.
“Hey! Calm down! Tell me, what is the matter?”
Safire shook herself slowly, then got up even more slowly. Then she said “My… son….”
“You lost a son?” asked Viara.
“He’s not dead, as far as I know. He’s just… missing.”
Viara looked at the purple dragon, then asked “Was he, by any chance, a young green dragon?”
“Yes!” said Safire, surprised.
“Come with me.” Said Viara.
Viara then took off from the ledge and glided down to a cave. Safire looked down for one second, then followed behind her.
“By the way, what is your name?” asked Viara
“Safire.” Said Safire, as she landed on the edge of the cave.
They were at the edge of a very large cave, large enough to comfortably hold 6 or 8 dragons. Viara went over to one corner of the cave, and gestered for Safire to follow.
Safire went over to the cave to see a tiny little green baby dragon.
“Mama!” it cried in happiness.
“Jade! You’re alright!” cried Safire with happiness. She hugged her young one the way that dragons do.
For the first time in days, Jade felt safe and happy. He happily returned the hug his mother had given him.
Viara smiled upon this happy moment. She then looked outside the cave, watching everything go by.
Just then, a yellow dragon swooped in, fear in his eyes, yelling “Dark Dragons! Dark Dragons! Save yourselves!”

The dragon flew the other way, and was suddenly hit with a strong blast of black fire. He fell, dead, falling to the ground like a stone.



Do not upset the ugly worm, lest it be a dragon in disguise. (>oo)>

 
Draconorn

Draconorn



  1/25/2007

:'( RIP dragon.

 
Wup

Wup



  1/25/2007

>:-(

Like I said, dragons are not to be judged by their element, Viara, for example, and Zack are both dark and they save captured dragons for a living.


ps. I haven't played Monster Raannnrrrnnchhdoggy
 
Draconorn

Draconorn



  1/26/2007

I know. I like darkness dragons [devil]
Viara is cool.

 
KC11

KC11


 visit KC11's website: DragonClawWritings (Tumblr)
  1/26/2007

Yes, but I'm sorta showing that there is prejudice in the dragon world too. Most of the non-dark dragon population believes that dark dragons are evil simply because of one day a century ago when a group of cruel teenage dark dragons attacked a group of innocent bystanders. /out of my head

Do not upset the ugly worm, lest it be a dragon in disguise. (>oo)>

 
awmanman

awmanman



  1/29/2007

Right. I thought evil dragons where "Dracolitch". And now Im confused as well.

Nine times have I been told im crazy and ten times I have accepted it.
 
Anita_Rose

Anita_Rose



  2/1/2007

:O I love dark dragons, I wish I wrote like that.
 
Wup

Wup



  3/20/2007

Just don't go too far with this...

ps. I haven't played Monster Raannnrrrnnchhdoggy
 
KC11

KC11


 visit KC11's website: DragonClawWritings (Tumblr)
  3/21/2007

?

BTW, sorry I haven't written in months. Just that Creatures Caves is a bit slow for me.

I don't think I'll do this fanfic anymore. Safire, Jade, and Zac all seem like old news now. In fact, no one does RPs here anymore.

Sorry folks. If you want a fanfic I'm currently working on, go to: THE WARP


Do not upset the ugly worm, lest it be a dragon in disguise. (>oo)>

 


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