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norndara
 
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9/27/2013 | |
In a time of strife and disaster, when the race of Norn, Grendel, and Ettin all face extinction, a humble little Grendel girl will rise and save them all. This is her tale. The Tale Of Dastia. |

Rat-tailed


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9/28/2013 | |
That was a short tale. |
 Tea Queen
Laura
    

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9/28/2013 | 1 |
I think that was just the introduction, Rat-tailed.  |

norndara
 
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9/28/2013 | |
Yeah it was. Just a little something to get people interested. |

norndara
 
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9/28/2013 | |
Prologue
It's midnight in the Desert Terrarium and pitch-black. There an abandoned cave near the volcano. Two Gaiuses make their way to the cave, one of them holding a small, glowing crystal. One says to the one holding the crystal "I don't know 'bout dis, Attoro. You know what they say 'bout her. She's crazy, hateful, vain, AND wants the world either under her rule, or destroyed. Ain't it just common sense to stay away from junk like that?" "Shut up Malduk and quit griping. We could use her pay. Us Geats haven't been thriving for years. Our lands have lost their fertility, other species no longer trade or invest in our economy, there's been plagues and famines. Would ya rather have you and your family starve, or be flippin rich?" Attoro replies angrily to Malduk. Upon arriving in the cave, they hear a creepy voice "Well, well, well. So you boys finally got my cryssstalll". It's Princess Aesila, sister to the Ettin Queen Umbralia. She grabs the crystal from Attoro and says "Hehehe, I've been dreaming about this moment, being to hold the fate of this pathetic world in my paws". Attoro, starting to get impatient with the princess's blather, says "Yadayadayada, sweetie, where's our pay? We nearly killed ourselves getting that stupid crystal that you keep blatherin 'bout". "Oh yeah, your pay. I thought I was forgetting something" replies Aesila. She picks up her dagger, which has been dipped in ATP Decoupler, and points it at Attoro and Malduk. Frightened, Attoro says "Whoa whoa whoa whoa, hold it right there sweetie. We ain't here to spat, we just want our reward and that's it, we ride". Menacingly, Aesila says "This is your reward" and stabs them both. It takes only the blink of an eye for the poison to take effect on the two unfortunate Gaiuses. Aesila steps on the body of Attoro and yells "Now there's nothing to stand in my way to either destroy all 4 Realms of this world, or become their ruler. Ahahahahaha!!!"
Well, what do you all think? Good little prologue to set the scene, yes? |
 Prodigal Sock
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9/30/2013 | |
She killed Gaiuses D:
That is one badflib little Ettin. I'd like to know what happens next! 
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norndara
 
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9/30/2013 | |
Aesila gets worse. Just throwing that out there. Anyway, here you all go. The birth of the story's heroine!
Chapter 1
Deep in the Grendel Jungle, there's a quaint little hut, made out of mud, sticks and leaves. It is the home of the Grendels Makaktu, Elasa, and Mavinu. Inside, Elasa tends to her large yellow egg. Her and Makaktu's son Mavinu plays with some toys nearby. Makaktu is outside tending to the family's crops of Tendrils and Mushrooms. Suddenly, the egg starts shaking and cracking. Elasa smiles, knowing that the egg will soon hatch. She claps at Mavinu to get his attention, and orders "Mavinu, please go outside and tell your father to come in. I would like for him to see his little girl hatch". Mavinu, in his rush to get outside, slips on some toys. Elasa growls a little bit and repeats her directions more firmly. This time, Mavinu walks outside and shouts to his father "Dad, the egg is hatching the egg is hatching!!!" Makaktu tosses away his farming tools and rushes to the hut along with his son. The family watches the egg shake and bounce until the top of the egg finally pops off. A tiny blue female Grendel peeks her head out of the egg. Upon seeing the three bigger Grendels in front of her, she squeaks and curls up in her egg. In Grendelish Bibble, Elasa says to the little girl "It's okay. I'm your mommy" and picks her up. In regular Handish, Elasa says to Makaktu "What should we name her? I'm thinking we should name her Dastia" "Well, it only seems fair that you name her, given that I named our son" Makaktu replies. Elasa then says "Dastia it is then". She holds up Dastia and yells "Welcome to the Realm of Grendels, little Dastia! You'll do great things one day, I'm certain". Elasa will never know how true those words are....
Just in case anyone is confused, the Prologue focused on Aesila because I wanted to introduce the villain at a time where it won't feel like an interruption to the storyline of another character. I don't know about you all, but I hate it when there's an interruption to an exciting part of the story and I want to avoid doing that as much as possible. Don't worry, I will have another chapter focus on Aesila at a time where it's convenient soon. |

TigerCivet
  
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10/2/2013 | |
Aww its a really nice story, we want more!  |

norndara
 
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10/2/2013 | |
Chapter 2
It's been a while since Dastia was born and she is now a child. While in her room she hears a conversation between her father and one of his friends. "Shut up. They found two dead Gaiuses in Aesila's Cave?!" Makaktu says to his friend. "I would never lie to you Makaktu! What makes the discovery even creepier is that they also found traces of ATP Decoupler in their system and a single stab wound on both. Some are thinking that Aesila herself killed them, though as to why is anybody's guess" answers his friend.
At that moment, Dastia walks into the room and asks the two "What are you two talking about?" "Er, adult matters sweetie. How about you go outside and help your mother and brother with the crops?" replies her father, looking like a secret was exposed. Obediently Dastia goes outside and looks for Elasa and Mavinu. She finds them planting Tendril seeds. Dastia goes to sit by her mother and asks her "Mommy, can you tell me the story of how the world came to be?" "Sorry sweetie but I'm busy right now. I promise to tell you the story at bedtime. Can you please help me out with planting these seeds? We need to have all the crops planted by tomorrow night" Elasa tells Dastia. Dastia obeys and helps her mother. The task takes all day. At bedtime Dastia reminds her mother about the promise. "Oh I'm sorry sweetie, I forgot. I'll tell you the story now. A long, long time ago, the mysterious and magical Shee created Norns, Grendels, Ettins, and Geats. The Shee took care of them, taught them the Shee language, gave them food when they were hungry and toys when they were bored.
One day, the Shee had to leave and where they were going, they couldn't take all of the Creatures with them. So, the Shee assigned a beast known as a Hand to take care of the Creatures who got left behind. The Hand was cruel. It would slap Grendels incessantly for no reason, it injected dangerous chemicals into Creatures, it drove away Geats from their part of the world, it took away all the food in the Ettin's part of the world, and many other horrible things. This went on for a very long time, but as time passed, the Creatures became smarter, stronger, and more long-lived, until eventually they rose up against the Hand.
After the Hand was driven away, the Creatures worked together to repair the world. When the world was fixed, the Creatures organized the world into 4 Realms: the Realm of the Norns, the Realm of the Grendels, the Realm of the Ettins, and the Realm of the Geats, each with their own unique inhabitants, economy, leadership, and culture. That is how it's been, and how it will always be. The End". Happy, Dastia says to her mother "Thank you Mommy. I really like that story. Goodnight, Mommy". Elasa replies "Goodnight, Dastia. I love you" and walks to her and Makaktu's room. It's the calm before the storm..... |

norndara
 
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10/5/2013 | |
At the same time the family was going to sleep, an ancient evil was being awakened. Deep inside Aesila's Cave in the the Desert Terrarium, Aesila was fiddling with her crystal.
"Hehehe. It feels nice to have you in my paws, crystal. Such evil power I can sense in you. With you, I can control thoughts, boost my powers of dark magic, and even wake demons from their long slumber. It's no wonder why most Geats would die to keep you away from creatures like me. But enough talk! The time has come for me to take my vengeance on this world and become it's ruler! Hidden here in this cave is a secret altar, dedicated to the 7 Dark Crystals, of which you are one of. If I summon your powers here, they'll be severely magnified. This world won't stand a chance!"
Aesila begins chanting a sinister song. "Ene gana! Ene gana! Awaken! Awaken! Rouse from your slumber, great demons of old, and wreck this world! Wreck this world! Ene gana!"
A long, low roar is heard. The cave starts shaking and rumbling. Aesila casts a teleportation spell and is out of the cave in a bright blue flash of light. The demons are rising, and the only thing able to stop them from destroying the world is a little Grendel girl... |

TigerCivet
  
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10/6/2013 | |
You are very good at writing! |

norndara
 
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10/13/2013 | |
Sorry for the looooooong wait guys!
The next morning, the family is outside watering the fields. Suddenly, a bell starts tolling. Elasa says to Makaktu "Hmm, what could that be? It's been a very long time since the Alert Bell tolled. Something just doesn't feel right....". "I'm sure it's fine honey. Probably one of the new sentries decided to mess with the Bell" "I guess you're right. What could go wrong on such a nice, peaceful day?". Elasa's question is answered when a thunderous roar fills the entire jungle and huge shadows appear on the ground.
Screams of terror tear through the once peaceful atmosphere, fires start, and a horrible smell of smoke and death fill the air. Elasa tells Dastia and Mavinu "Kids, we want you to go to the secret exit we showed not long ago. No matter what happens, you must get there!". She shoves the two kids in the direction of the exit and shouts "Go! Go! Go! We'll hold off these.....beasts that are attacking! GO NOW!".
Dastia and Mavinu rush towards the exit. Once there, Dastia makes the mistake of turning around to see her parents one last time. She sees them on the ground, scorched and slashed beyond almost all recognition. Their final act was to put a hand on each other. Tears in her eyes, Dastia whispers "Goodbye, Mommy. Goodbye Daddy". Dastia turns back to her brother and says "They're gone, big brother. They're both gone" and falls to the ground crying. Mavinu goes to comfort his little sister and puts his hand on her. "I know, sis, I know. The important thing is that we made it here and might survive. That's what they care about. Now, let's go through this odd door here. I've always wondered about what's beyond this door". But before Mavinu can open the door, he sees something that both terrifies him and fills him with wonder. An odd marking that looks like a pair of wings is on the back of her right hand. He wonders why hasn't seen the marking before, but wonders even more why the legendary Sign of the Silver Phoenix is on his sister..... |

norndara
 
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10/15/2013 | |
And here's yet another part! Enjoy!
The two siblings enter the door and see a very foreign world before them. A vast desert with the occasional cactus. What stuns them even more is the enormous amount of Ettins roaming the desert. Most of them are riding carts being towed by Gnarlers, but a few are on foot. Some of them are selling food and toys in exchange for gadgets(Something unique about Ettins is that they use gadgets for currency in their Realm).
While marveling at everything in the Ettin Realm, the two don't notice a pair of Ettins behind them. It takes a jab from one of the Ettin's spear to wake them out of their trance. "Who are you and what business do you have in the Realm of Ettins?" he barks. The other Ettin smacks him on the hand and scolds "Be nice. Look at these two. It's clear something horrible happened to them. What's wrong, you two?" but before they could answer, the spear holder hits her hard on the jaw, knocking her down. The siblings try to go to her, but the spear holder growls "Leave her. She'll learn that her weakness, disrespect, and disobedience will earn her nothing but pain".
He points his spear at the siblings and says "I repeat, what are you doing here in the Realm of Ettins? Refusal to answer deems you intruders with ill intent and gives me permission to kill you and leave your bodies here for the Uglees!". The siblings' eyes grow wide with fear and Mavinu answers "W-we h-h-hail from the R-Realm of G-Grendels sir. There was a horrible attack by.....some kind of monster sir. We are one of few to make it out alive. Our parents were killed in the attack. Please, you must help us!"
The spear holder considers their story for a second then barks "Is there any proof to your story?" and Mavinu replies "Just take a look through the door. You'll see more than enough proof". The spear holder opens the door and is horrified by what he sees. Fire and smoke cover the once lush jungle, dead Grendels are everywhere. Afterward he says to Mavinu "Take my hand boy. You girl, take my apprentice's hand and the boy's". Then he activates a teleporter that takes them in front of a castle made out of special sand.
The spear holder says to the siblings "Welcome to the Castle of Mirages and Sandstorms, home to the Ettin Queen Umbralia!" |

norndara
 
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10/19/2013 | |
The first thing that Mavinu says is "Why are we here? Are we going to be punished?". The spear holder mutters some hurtful insults about the intelligence of Grendels then says "No idiot, you and your companion the girl are going to be taken to Umbralia for questioning. If there's been an attack on the Realm of Grendels, it's highly important that Her Highness knows so she can prepare for an attack on us and perhaps assist survivors of the Grendel Realm attack". He gives commands to the siblings and his apprentice "My apprentice, you are to take these two to a room where they can eat, rest, and freshen up while I announce their arrival to the queen". The apprentice salutes and shouts "Yes sir!'.
The group enters the castle. The spear holder takes a direct route toward the stairs that will take him to Umbralia while his apprentice takes the siblings to a guest room. While on their way, the apprentice starts talking to them "Hello. My name is Skyla and my mentor's name is Talo. What are your names travelers?". Mavinu tells Skyla his name and Dastia tells hers. Skyla then says to them "Nice names. So what do you think of the Realm of Ettins travelers? Very grand isn't it?". The siblings agree and Dastia comments "Wow! That's a cool marking you have on your paw. Is it real?". Upon hearing her, Skyla seems to become rather jumpy and ignores the question. Dastia frowns slightly and changes the subject by asking "So are you Ok after Talo hit you? That looked like it really hurt..." "I'm fine. I've gotten much worse from him. He can be just brutal sometimes" Skyla answers.
After a bit more chatting, the group arrives at an appropriate guest room for the siblings. Skyla tells them "Here is one of the guest rooms. We use these to temporarily house any guests who have come to meet with the queen. This room is where you will eat the meals served to you and where you will sleep. Any damage to this room will have to repaid by you via a method sentenced by the queen". She rambles for a bit on their schedule, procedures at the castle, and some more minor issues.
After Skyla is called to her mentor, the siblings talk for a bit. Dastia says to her brother "This place is pretty nice. Skyla seems like a nice girl, and with any luck the survivors of the attack will get some help. There's only one thing bothering me though. Did you see the marking on her, brother? It looked very odd. I also can't shake of the feeling that I should know her from somewhere..." |
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