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Tarilithina
  

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9/3/2013 | 2 |
For VLACS, I was assigned to write a fake newspaper article about some important change in my life. I chose to write about Creatures, and what lessons I have learned from it, by pretending to write as a reporter for a science newspaper who was trying to convince people to use Creatures as a teaching tool. The article is extremely vague, as I felt that anything more in depth about the game would have dragged away from the topic and confused my teacher(as far as I know, she has never heard of Creatures). Sorry about the horrible formatting.
So, here is the article I wrote, with some editing:
What is Creatures, and why should you play it?
Creatures is an artificial life game created by Steve Grand in the mid-1990s. It focuses on small, furry creatures called norns. Not unlike other artificial life games, your job is to protect and take care of these creatures. How this game is different, however, is that norns are not scripted. Each individual norn has its own genetic file which determines its appearance and behavior. This means that each norn is unique and has its own personality. Editing these genomes and observing the changes in the creature can be used to aid in learning about genetics, half-lives, chemical reactions, biochemistry, and even the inner workings of the brain. Seeing how each change effects a creature can even help us understand human biology, such as in Mike L Anderson's Norn Lab which experiments with creating objects in the game which mimic the effects of drugs, and then testing these substances on norns, so that people can see what the effects of drugs are on humans. Of course, not every lesson learned is about the creatures themselves. Creatures are surrounded by the objects in their world, which, through the understanding of CAOS, the coding language the game is scripted in, can be altered. Learning a simple language and its uses can help later on in learning more complex ones, or more complex uses for languages that are already known. Even through just creating images for the game, lessons are taught about image editing, tints, different types of images, and how to create better images. Through an artificial world, Creatures teaches us more about our own. In fact, even social skills can be taught through this game. The game has a friendly and informational community, like the community on Creatures Caves through which you can learn about how to get your point across, how to debate politely, what is and is not allowed in a polite, informal setting, how speaking online differs from offline, and other online social skills, all with a friendly community who will tolerate mistakes and give a safe place in which to learn. In addition, learning with others can help you to better understand things that confuse or stump you. The game also has many resources, like the Creatures Wiki which can aid in finding more information about any topic you wish to learn about. Even if you are not trying to learn or teach about anything, Creatures is still a great game to play. The backgrounds are beautiful, the creatures are cute, the mechanics are interesting, and there is always more to discover about the game. With all of this in mind, please give Creatures a try.
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 Tea Queen
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I really enjoyed reading your article, Tarilithina. It's informative, links to the right places, and it would make me want to investigate the Creatures further with a view to playing it (not that I'm at all biased)! |

Tarilithina
  

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Yeah, I tried to make it very informative and persuasive, but to me it feels really awkward to try and force my writing into another style like I had to do here, which results in clumsy wording and phrasing. Having to make sure the teacher would understand it was also a little bit difficult.
The thing that I really like about your writing, Laura, is that your writing style is very bouncy and fun to read. It is friendly, informative, and persuasive when needed. You always respect others opinions and writing styles, and you are ready to accept new information and guide others.
I think your writing is what mine aspires to be when it grows up .
In all seriousness, though, I really admire your writing.
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Aw, thank you; you've got me feeling all bashful now! ![[nlaugh] [nlaugh]](/images/smilies/emot_laugh.gif)
I'm so happy to read that I've been an inspiration to someone. Other people seem to have a higher opinion of me than I do! I've always really enjoyed writing and I suppose it just takes a great deal of practice in order to hone that skill really. However, when it's also coupled with something you feel passionate about (i.e. Creatures and the Creatures Community) the words flow more easily, and I've been writing posts on this forum for years now. That, and I often read over what I've written and tweak it until I think it sounds right! Saying that though, I actually haven't updated the Ask Laura column in forever. Ironically I've been suffering from writer's block.
Keep writing; what I've seen so far is promising. Even though your article is vague, you've still managed to convey lots of information concisely and in a limited amount of space too, if that makes sense. ![[nsmile] [nsmile]](/images/smilies/emot_smile.gif) |

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I think that my skill at explaining stuff comes from explaining whatever I am currently working on in Creatures to my parents, who don't play Creatures. If I'm writing for people who already know about Creatures, I think I can do away with all the vagueness. With this, though, I think vague was better, as it is more of an introduction than an in-depth explanation.
I really hope that my teacher will be able to understand the article, but it might sound really confusing to her because she doesn't know about it.
Anyway, I think that writing this will help me with writing that tinting tutorial for Clohse, because with that I'll also have to make sure that I am explaining it well and keeping it simple. Like you said, the tutorial being about Creatures will probably make writing it easier, especially with all the experiments I was doing with tinting last night.
That was way longer than I thought it was going to be. Anyway, thank you for having confidence in me, and I really enjoy your writing style!
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