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But I'm Scared - A Hardman's Story | |
|  Wee Scrivener
Trell
    

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1/4/2013 | |
This is the story of a female Hardman Norn named Drossel. Drossel is a timid Norn who is terrified of Grendels, the Jungle, everything, and because of it, is constantly picked on and eventually sent away. Then she meets Flick and Annie - an exceedingly hyper Bondi and an Ettin with a passion for cheese - who help her find a way to be happy with who she is.
I hope you guys like it, although it'll be in shorter bursts then my last one.
Part 1
Deep in the heart of the Jungle, a small group of Hardman Norns gathered around. The new egg of a highly respected pair was about to hatch. The proud parents watched with pride as a bright baby girl peeked out of the egg. "Nice bright eyes, good bone structure..." murmured the small crowd as they watched her take her first steps. She tottered a bit and fell on her face. "Awful clumsy though..."
Betty, the mother of this new baby, stepped forward, picked the sniffling Nornling up, and held her close. "Her name will be Drossel, and it's nothing a bit of training can't iron out!" she snapped.
She set Drossel down in front of the bright green Mecha Grendel that all young Norns played with. "Go on," urged her mother. "Push toy!"
Drossel stared up at it, shaking. She toddled up and gave it a slight nudge. The Mecha Grendel sprang to life, hopping forward and growling menacingly. Strangely, rather than punting it across the terrarium like most Hardman children did, Drossel ran to Bunt, her daddy, and cried into his fur. The crowd dispersed, some snickering to themselves.
Betty and Bunt exchanged a look of concern. It seemed it would take a lot of training to help Drossel become a good, solid Hardman.
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1/5/2013 | |
haha,D'aww poor little nornling XD
Hardman norns are quite rough and proud acting,not easy when being among such Norns who think high of themself and is not one with the crowd - namely a outsider,well not by apperance,but at heart XD
Thats a good start of this story,me thinks :3
I did sneak read a bit the other sad one you had ^^
Im sure this will be a good one - liked the first part so far! |

lisha777
  
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1/5/2013 | |
The first part is really good!
Keep it up!
‘All we have to decide is what to do with the time that is given to us.’ – Gandalf the Grey |

FlyingEttiNorn
  
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1/5/2013 | 1 |
I have a plot idea - there's one hardman who doesn't pick on Drossel, because he knows how she feels since he has a problem with his legs. When Drossel flees from the Jungle Terrarium the little guy follows her. |
 Wee Scrivener
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1/5/2013 | |
It's like you read my mind! ![[nlaugh] [nlaugh]](/images/smilies/emot_laugh.gif)
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Malkin
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1/5/2013 | |
I like how you've developed Hardman society in the few short paragraphs of the story - keep it up! ![[ngrin] [ngrin]](/images/smilies/emot_grin.gif)
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1/6/2013 | |
Part 2
As Drossel continued to grow in the Jungle community, her clear personality difference became more pronounced. All of the other young Hardmans constantly picked on her, teasing her and excluding her... All but one little boy. He had all the fire and spirit of a true Hardman, but he was crippled with a limp. His name was Seven. He usually kept out of sight, to avoid the torment from his peers.
"Hey Drossel, did you hear the grown ups wanna feed you to a Grendel?" called on of the other Hardman children in the play area. "Yeah, but scaredy Norns like you would probably make it sick!" jeered another. Drossel stumbled and tried to get away from them. "Leave me alone! J-just go away!" she cried.
"Whassa matter, ya scared?" said one of the big girls, Gemma, with a mean grin on her face. "Aww, poor baby Drossel's scared of the Grendel toy!" she grinned back at the others and pushed Drossel to the ground. "Why don't we go find the real thing?"
The other Hardman kids all cried out in agreement. "YEAH!! We can rough it up real good!" Gemma shook her head. "If Drossel can beat it up, she can be a part of the group. Like initiation." The others cheered, but Drossel looked horrified. "Whassa matter Drossel? Too chicken?" said Gemma.
Drossel gulped. "I-I want to play with you guys... B-but..."
Gemma glared. "But what?"
"But I'm scared..."
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 Lollipop Lord
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1/6/2013 | |
These Hardman children are a bunch of meanies, poor Drossel!  |
 Wee Scrivener
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1/6/2013 | |
They actually do care deeply for each other, but they shun anything different. But still... Poor little gal. I actually made a Norn with a Treehugger genome and the looks of a Hardman and named her Drossel.
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1/16/2013 | |
Terribly sorry for the lack of updates to this, I've been quite busy with school and life and all that. Anyway, here's the latest part of Drossel's adventure!
Part 3
That night, the group of Hardman children stole away into the heart of the Jungle, dragging poor frightened Drossel with them. Gemma looked on from a low branch on a nearby tree, grinning at the scene as two of the boys rolled in a large, rough, goldish creature egg. "Fresh from the nest for ya, lucky we got it before the big ones noticed!" gasped the bigger of the two boys.
"This is gonna be easy, even for a scaredy-Norn like you, Drossel! It's just gonna be a baby. No way a Hardman can be beat by a li'l baby. Not even a weakling like you." sneered Gemma. The crowd looked on with excitement as the egg cracked apart. A small Grendel staggered out, with a bewildered look on it's face.
The crowd roared with laughter. "It's just a pipsqueak!" called one of the younger kids. "I could take it in my sleep!" cried another. As the crowd of young Norns laughed and jeered for a fight, the little Grendel hid behind his egg, with a sad look on his face.
Drossel approached it slowly, and was quite surprised when it cowered away from her outstretched paw. "Exmly scared..." gasped the Grendel.
"I w-won't hurt you..!" whispered Drossel, hoping nobody would hear her. Unfortunately for her, Gemma overheard.
"Excuse me? What do ya think you're doin'?" growled Gemma, angrily.
Drossel stepped instinctively in front of the Grendel boy. "I-I don't w-want to hurt him..." she stammered. "H-he's scared!"
Gemma shot her a look of disgust. "Ya know, I knew you were messed up in the head, but this really takes the cake! Whassa matter with you?!" she tried to push Drossel aside. "Move it, loser. I'll finish this myself."
What happened next was a surprise to everyone, including Drossel. The timid Hardman Norn reached up and delivered a slap across Gemma's face. Drossel barely had time to comprehend what had happened, when Gemma tackled her, screaming rude words and giving poor Drossel the beating of a lifetime.
The next thing she knew, Drossel was sent away from her Jungle home, disowned by her own sorrowful parents, declared by the others to be a shame to the Hardman species. Who'd ever heard of a Hardman standing up for a Grendel; and then picking a fight with her own kind to protect said Grendel? It was certainly unheard of.
Poor Drossel, she'd had enough of being picked on for being weak, for being scared, and most of all, for being different... She thought back to the Grendel. "Exmly scared..." The words echoed in the back of her mind. She sympathized for the poor Grendel. He was just scared, just like she was... Drossel sat down in the middle of the corridor and cried.
"But I'm scared..."
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weeneybomber
 
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1/16/2013 | |
What a tear jerker! This is really good keep it up! |
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1/16/2013 | |
Why thank you luv! It gets happier, don't you worry!
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1/18/2013 | |
Here we go again, more of Drossel's adventure!
Part 4
As Drossel wandered the corridors of the Ark, she became quite bored. There were no toys here, only the odd gadget or two, which made irritating sounds when she got near. There was no food either, and she was beginning to feel very hungry. Her stomach growled fiercely as she came across a door, with a green sign beside it. Maybe there was food behind that door? She decided to push through to find out. What she saw on the other side of the door was astounding. Bright, clean surroundings, flitting birds and crawling bugs, pleasant shaded areas under trees full of fruit. Fruit! There was fruit here! Drossel couldn't believe her eyes.
She went to get a closer look at this wonderful scene when she was stopped short by an impatient looking Bruin male. "State your name and business." he grumbled. Drossel stared at the ground, nervously. "I'm Drossel... A-and I was lookin' for a place to stay..." she mumbled, shyly. The Bruin Norn sighed and looked her up and down, taking note of her many bruises, scrapes, and blackened eye.
"You certainly look a little worse for wear. I think we can find a place for you." he sighed. "Where did you come from?"
Drossel stammered. "W-well, I used to live in the Jungle, but-"
He cut her off. "The Jungle?! I'm sorry lady, but we can't allow any of you Jungle folk in here! Last time one of you came around here, we had a breakout of all sorts of histamines and antigens. No way I can let that happen again!" He shook his head sadly. "Sorry miss, but you'll have to find a different place to stay."
Drossel looked at the Bruin, indignantly. He sighed again. "Look, two doors down the hall is a nice place with a bunch of Ettins. Maybe you'll have better luck there." he said, before shooing her back into the hall. "Good luck!" he called after her. She wandered back out into the empty hallway, muttering. "I only wanted a couple fruits... Maybe a place to have a nap..."
After more wandering in the corridors of the Ark, Drossel sat down with a huff. She was most certainly not diseased! Why the nerve of him! She stood up and stomped her little foot on the ground. Drossel kicked at the wall. Was this what anger felt like? She'd never felt like this before. She aimed another kick at a nearby gadget, missed, and fell on her rump. When would she finally catch a break from all this humiliation?
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1/22/2013 | |
Part 5
The Ark was a frightening place when the lights went out. Completely dark, with only the occasional flash of a gadget to light the way, and machinery beeping overhead. Drossel did not like it one bit. She stumbled about blindly, fearing what may lurk in the darkness all around her.
As she continued to pad down the darkened corridors, she grew more and more afraid. Coming to rest beside a lift call button, she sighed. Her rest didn't last long, however. She heard footsteps approaching... Slowly, sneaking, scary... She didn't wait to find out who it was. With a shriek, she hammered the button until a lift came up. She stepped inside and shut the door, her little heart thumping like mad. She staggered out of the lift and into a cool metal door.
She looked up with dread. What she saw confirmed her worst fears. Yes, this was the airlock. Surely she was doomed now. The hidden menace would surely send her out into the airless vacuum of space. Her breathing became shallow and panicked. Driven by pure fear, she started shaking and crying.
Her foot touched something, and she jumped. Some sort of button... A teleporter perhaps? She didn't care. It would take her somewhere else, and anywhere was better than here! She pushed the button with all her might, and in the blink of an eye, she was gone.
A few moments later, a lift descended to the lower part of the Ark. Two creatures stepped out and surveyed the dark area... A voice called out. "Drossel?! Drossel where'd ya go?!" It was none other than Seven, the limping boy from the Jungle, and a most odd acquaintance, Ung, the little Grendel that Drossel had saved! They'd come to find Drossel, but sadly, she was already gone, teleported somewhere else, and the unlikely two had no way of knowing how to find her!
Meanwhile, Drossel was bathed in a soft blue-ish light. "Where am I..?" She gazed all around in wonder. This certainly wasn't the Ark! She sat down, taking in her surroundings. It certainly was a breathtaking sight, small though it was. Perhaps there might be some fruit here to satisfy her hunger? She wandered through the nearest door.
There didn't appear to be any creatures here...
She took a lift down and saw a bunch of colorful bouncy balls. Drossel had never had toys before! She chased them around until she could chase no more, laughing with joy. She sat down and frowned at her grumbling stomach. She mumbled a complaint of hunger, and to her amazement, a nearby thing dispensed some fruit. Drossel scrambled over and sank her teeth into the stringy fruit. She lay back down, now with a full stomach, and cried out with joy. "This place has EVERYTHING!!"
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Malkin
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1/22/2013 | |
I love the way you've described the Hardman stamp. I hope that that paradise Drossel's found is truly abandoned, and that Ung and Seven don't come to grief in the halls of the ark...
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1/22/2013 | |
Why thank you! And oh, it certainly isn't abandoned... You'll just have to wait and see what happens next! ![[nsmirk] [nsmirk]](/images/smilies/emot_smirk.gif)
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4/5/2013 | |
When Drossel awoke, she felt the full effects of her many bruises and scrapes. She moaned in pain as she rolled over, clutching her stomach. She felt nauseous and dizzy. The soft blue light of the room now seemed harsh and blinding. Drossel sat up, tears stinging in her eyes.
She'd taken a good number of hits to the stomach. She tried standing up, only to fall to her knees, retching the contents of her stomach onto the cool floor. She wavered at the sight of it. "Is that... B-blood..?" she thought. "Yes... That's blood... My blood... What's going on...? I don't like this...."
Her thoughts melded together as she slipped into unconsciousness.
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4/7/2013 | |
She woke up what seemed eons later, to the sounds of beeping machinery and chattering voices. The lights of the area no longer seemed harsh and blinding, but instead washed over her with soft light. Her wounds no longer throbbed and stung. Her vision cleared a bit and she saw a pair of large, red eyes staring down at her. Drossel began to panic, but the creatures silenced her and continued muttering.
"Slight concussion, mild fractures..."
the red-eyed creature cocked her head to the side and poked Drossel's stomach a bit. "Possible internal bleeding..." she stood up and addressed a blue Norn surveying the scene, who seemed to bounce on his toes just standing still. "No histamines, no antigens, nothing too serious. She's pretty beat up, but once we get her rested and fed, she'll be back on her feet in no time." she said.
Drossel sat up, wincing a bit at her unhappy stomach. "W-who are you..?" she stammered. The two creatures stopped chatting and helped Drossel to her feet. The red-eyed female spoke first. "I'm Annie," she said, "And I'm an Ettin." she added, noticing Drossel's look of confusion.
The bouncy Norn boy took Drossel's hand and shook it rapidly. "Hi! Hi there! I'm Flick, I'm a Bondi and I think you have pretty hair! I like to play. Annie likes cheese! What do you like? Hi! I'm Flick!" He chattered on excitedly. Annie gave him a bewildered look and he stopped with a huff.
"Sorry about that," said Annie. "He's, excitable." Drossel smiled a bit.
"I'm Drossel..." she whispered. "Um... Where am I?" she asked, looking all around at the shiny walls of the area.
Annie grinned. "Welcome Drossel, to the Capillata!"
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4/7/2013 | |
Great to see you've finally got round to updating it! I can't wait to hear the rest.  |
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4/7/2013 | |
Yeppers! I've updated twice now! 
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4/8/2013 | |
Drossel nearly fainted again. She'd hear stories of the Capillata from the elder Norns in the Jungle... Horrible stories... Stories of a terrible beast known as The Hand. Tales of being forced to breed with deadly Toxic Norns, and the tragic resulting offspring... Drossel remembered one such Norn. She was a Hardman-Toxic mix. She was always sickly, the antigens and antibodies she naturally produced raged ever-living war on her immune system. All the other children avoided her, afraid of catching her diseases. Perhaps most notably, she had an awkward, limping gait that earned her the name Bouncy. She didn't live past childhood...
Drossel began to shake with fear. She didn't want to be put through painful tests or breeding experiments! She especially didn't want to meet that horrible monster that lurked about the Capillata halls... The Hand... She shuddered at the very thought of its name. Snapping out of her stupor, Drossel turned to run away, back to the button that must lead home. She ran straight into a Grendel dummy instead.
She fell back, panicking at the sight of it. Ignoring the bewildered looks on Flick and Annie's faces, she backed into the lift, and slammed on the up button as fast as she could. As the lift ascended, she began to cry. There went her only chance to make friends... The lift neared the upper floor when she heard a sound that nearly made her heart stop...
The hissing of the door opening and closing... Drossel covered her face with her paws, hoping she wouldn't be seen. She stole a glance at the door and saw no creature coming towards her. Trembling, she looked upwards, and locked eyes on the very beast her elders spun legends about...
The Hand.
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Malkin
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Not the cliffhangers! XD
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Drossel screamed in panic and began slamming the lift buttons again. It was no use. The Hand swooped down and lifted her off her feet, dropping her in a small chamber that immediately locked. She pounded on the side of the chamber, screaming and crying to be let out! Flick and Annie did not hear, and went back to their conversation. She watched in horror as Flick and Annie went up in the lift and left the room.
How could they not notice her abduction? Upon hearing Drossel's cries of fear and unhappiness, The Hand dropped a ball into the chamber and began messing with the controls. "What sort of sick torture is this?!" thought Drossel, now frozen with terror at what might happen next...
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5/5/2013 | |
I enjoyed the first part the best. |
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The small chamber began filling up with a sickish smelling pink gas... Drossel fell to the cool metal floor, coughing. She heard the Hand beast speak an unknown language, telling her to "Rest". "Rest?!" cried Drossel indignantly. "What kind of Handish curse is this beast placing on me?!" her mind raced as she sat up. Drossel began pounding on the side of the chamber once again, screaming to be let out. The clouds of pink smoke were getting thicker, and she felt woozy. She sat back down and whimpered.
When the ghastly smoke cleared, Drossel discovered the Hand beast had disappeared. "Good riddance..." she muttered. The chamber door was now open, and she made a beeline for the exit. She came face to face with what she first thought was a Grendel! Drossel yelped as she jumped back, shaking. This was apparently not a Grendel, but some crude dummy obviously placed here to occupy savage beasts such as Hands. Still nervously shivering, she sat herself down in a corner and shut her eyes tight. Seeing the dummy reminded her of the Mecha Grendel that the other children loved to play with... She sat back, her thoughts drifting to memories of home as she fell asleep...
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Malkin
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5/5/2013 | |
Awwww - I love how you've taken the training dummy and looked through the eyes of a norn at it.
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5/5/2013 | |
Thanks luv! The whole idea is that the story is told through Nornish eyes.
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