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The Delicate and the Afflicted   
Pann
Small Birb

Pann
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  9/25/2010

This was originally a little random story I made up off the top of my head a few months ago, talking with my boyfriend. I had decided to continue on with it, and he contributed to the story too. I just found the chat logs today, and got an idea to retype the story so it would be more detailed, and post it up here. This is what I have so far:


Part 1



The Delicate and the Afflicted


Once in the Shee Starship and Capillata, there were two norns who knew one another, a toxic and a treehugger. They were more than just friends: they loved each other. Other norns believed it impossible. How on earth could a poisonous norn such as he love such a fragile breed? It was like combining gasoline and fire. But the two were set out to prove that the others were wrong.
It was a troublesome relationship, but the pair knew that for love to thrive, the obstacles must be overcome. They got along perfectly and fit like two peas in a pod, so that wasn't the issue, but if the toxic got too close to his beloved, she would fall ill immediately. She would begin coughing and sneezing a moment later, and sometimes develop a high fever.

The toxic was tired of having to worry about infecting her, so he asked the Hand to make a suit for him. The Hand, thankfully, was kindhearted and did succeed in developing one just for him. The toxic gratefully took it and began to wear it when he was with her. It worked well, and he could touch her, yet...not exactly. He wished he could kiss her. But he knew that if germs got to her mouth, things would fare even worse.

The toxic sat one day in his favorite room, the Garbage Dump. Other toxic norns hung about occasionally and a few female norns made eyes at him, but he was not interested. He loved his mate best of all. He just adored how she carried the traits of nature with her, had such a unique personality, and loved how, unlike him, she did not need pathogens to thrive. He wondered how he could safely progress the relationship further without harming her.

Walking down the Norn Terrarium garden, the treehugger pondered the very same thing. "How can I kiss him? I really, really want to..." she thought to herself. Other norns all had a normal relationship, they could even have families. She knew that, upon thinking this, she realized she seemed ungrateful. "I am truly lucky. I am. My relationship is just challenging, but that's exactly what makes it special. Love perseveres in hardships, and we will overcome this."

The treehugger wondered what she could do to make any illness go away fast. She then remembered how excellent lemons worked. Taking one in her hand on a nearby lemon trellis, she decided maybe consuming it immediately after she kissed him could work. But unfortunately she was so set on this she didn't think at all of the risk that came with kissing. Excited, she raced to tell him.

''Really?!'' was the toxic's elated response. "Yes, if I eat this lemon straight away, after we were to kiss, I'm sure I'd be fine. Just in case, I'll eat more than one,'' she replied gleefully.

And with that, she turned and ran off to gather more. She didn't notice a rather angry looking norn gazing past her behind a tree.


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Malkin

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  9/25/2010

Awwwww! <3 This is sooo cute! Please write more soon! :D

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Pann
Small Birb

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  9/25/2010

Thank you! We already got the whole story down pat, I will post them soon.

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Pann
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  9/26/2010

Part 2:


Singing happily, the treehugger norn was back at the lemon trellis. She picked several lemons off it and headed back. On the way she spotted a hardman norn. He looked at her and smiled sweetly. "Hi there, how are you today?"

"Um, hello, I'm fine, thanks."

"Would you like to go somewhere with me sometime?" offered the suspicious norn.

"No, thank you, I already have a mate," the treehugger shook her head.

The hardman clearly looked frustrated already. "Okay, your call then. Would you at least let me help you carry those lemons?"

''Well, okay, thanks." The treehugger shyly handed him three lemons, and the two walked off. "Where are we headed?" asked the hardman. "To the Norn Meso," replied the treehugger, and they arrived there shortly. The toxic norn was sitting there by himself, in his plastic suit. The hardman narrowed his eyes and made a nasty look in his direction. The treehugger norn didn't notice and went running to him, quickly taking the lemons from the hardman first, and giving him a nod of gratitude. She wrapped her arms around the toxic. "I've got the lemons, and he helped me!" she pointed his way. The toxic met his gaze and felt uneasy even though they'd never met. The hardman glowered and turned away, exiting out the door.

"I wonder what that was all about," the toxic said quietly. "What was what all about?'' asked the treehugger curiously. "Ah, it's nothing I guess," sighed the toxic. He then brightened. "I'm glad you got these lemons, are you prepared?" "Yes, I truly am!" grinned the treehugger. With that, the toxic pushed a button on his suit, and his helmet part popped open like an astronaut helmet. The treehugger didn't wait, and charged full force on him, locking lips. It was quite a long kiss, and she didn't realize this sort of kiss is what makes a norn pregnant. They pulled away finally, and she quickly took a lemon and bit into it, swallowing rapidly. The toxic looked anxious.
"Is...it working?" The treehugger took several more bites and nodded. "I was starting to feel very sick, but I'm recovering fast!" The toxic pressed the button again and his protective helmet came back on. "That felt wonderful, love." He grabbed her hand and held it tightly.


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C-Rex
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  9/27/2010

Great story so far! I hope the treehugger isn't pregnant though. Toxic crosses usually die after birth.
 
Pann
Small Birb

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  9/27/2010

I'm glad you like the story!

I know that some things will eventually go wrong.


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Malkin

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  9/27/2010

this sort of kiss is what makes a norn pregnant

Oh dearie dearie doo. XD Looking forward to the next thrilling installment!


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Pann
Small Birb

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  9/27/2010

Haha thank you! :3

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Jodie

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  10/1/2010

awww I love, love storys ^-^ but I hope the Treehugger isn't pregnant it will be hard for her if her baby dies :(. But keep writing ^-^ I love the story ^-^


 
Melody

Melody



  10/2/2010

You must write more! I've got to know what happens! O_O
I can't wait until you write the next chapter! :D



 
Pann
Small Birb

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  10/13/2010

Oh thank you! I've been a bit busy, but I definitely want to complete it.

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Harlequinade

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  11/27/2010

That is actually really, really, good. :D MOAR
 
scoota94

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  11/27/2010

This could definitely be my favourite fanfiction for creatures :D

Great Job, can't wait to see what happens!


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Pann
Small Birb

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  11/30/2010

Thank you! I know I haven't updated in a while, but I haven't forgotten. I'm trying to plan out whether to change the next part or not.

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  12/21/2010

Part 3:


The two continued on their happy ways, and not a single worry came to mind. To some norns their relationship was still seen as foolish. It was especially pointed out in the few hours to come, and the two hadn't realized it until now.

The treehugger norn was starting to feel strange, she felt a lot more tired suddenly and didn't want to move much. She was also getting a bit sick to her stomach. But the obvious reason why this was happening hadn't occurred
to her one bit. She assumed at first the lemons didn't work completely and her love had made her sick after all. Pacing the bottom floor of the Norn Meso, she thought to herself anxiously. "It didn't work after all, did it? But I thought the lemons could really make you feel better. Was I wrong in kissing him? Maybe my fragile body really can't handle it?" She had no idea what to do. She decided to ask a friend of hers, who was an intelligent gargoyle norn. She was lounging about in the Norn Garden on the very first floor near the entrance. "Hi there," said the treehugger. The gargoyle saw her concerned face. "Are you alright dear?" she asked.

"I'm not really. I kissed my mate earlier today, and now I feel sick. I ate several lemons so that he wouldn't get me ill, but I'm beginning to think they didn't work..." She looked down at the ground with her ears drooped.

"Sick? Did you kisspop him, by any chance? Not a kiss on the cheek?" asked her friend, fluttering her wings nervously.

"Kisspop? You mean on the lips? Yes....we did." The treehugger norn looked wide-eyed.

"Oh dear...oh, oh dear...tut tut..." her friend clapped her furry hand to her face. The treehugger stared, frightened. "I...I did the wrong thing, didn't I? I really AM ill..."

"No dear, the reason why you are sick is because kisspopping makes you pregnant."

At the sound of this, the treehugger went pale. "P...pregnant...? M-me?"

"Yes...but I thought you knew about this. All norns know, or so I thought. Your parents didn't educate you on the birds and the bees?" Her friend looked bewildered.

"No, um...I never knew my parents. I did catch a glimpse of my mother, but she was killed by a grendel. When I was raised, it was by many norns. I was never taught these things for some reason. Maybe that's why I never chose a treehugger as my mate." Her friend put a hand on her shoulder. "I'm here for you no matter what, dear. I'll help you have the egg, if need be. But if this baby is half toxic...I'm hoping he or she will be able to survive, since both breeds are very different."

"I will have it no matter what. I will show the world that our child is a blend of both and maybe norns will love each other no matter the breed more often," replied the treehugger. She now gazed down at her belly, and patted it. "Do you know when the egg will arrive?" she asked her friend.

"It will very soon, in perhaps a half hour. Our eggs develop very fast," said the gargoyle. "Your stomach is soon going to be much larger. How many symptoms have you had?"

"I felt really tired first, and then I couldn't eat anything because my stomach felt nauseous and wouldn't agree."

"It will be here before you know it," her friend answered. "Let's inform your mate and make preparations."


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Malkin

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  2/24/2011

Yay! :D I hope the baby is ok!

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Gumbo

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  2/25/2011

lol i love this!



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Pann
Small Birb

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  4/5/2011

Thanks you guys! Sorry for the horrible lack of updates. Kinda stuck in where to go next for this. I will try hard to finish it though, even if it takes a while!

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